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Environment is the natural world, within which people, animals and plants live. However, environment is getting serious pollution. It doesn't only destroy human lives but also influences on all living beings.
We can save our environment by every way. The example, we don't pour chemicals and waste oil on to the ground or into drains leading to bodies of water; reduce emissions from cars by walking or cycling; join as many tree planting activities.
Besides, many species are now in danger of becoming extinct. Among the threats to have endangered species are business that buy and sell animals for their skin, fur and other parts. To prevent, the authorities should fine and require work that help to protect the animals and plants they are harming. This can help people understand how destructive them environment.
Because environment is neccessary thing for this life, so we should protect the environment, it's mean that we are protecting our life.
 
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it's mean we are protecting our life.
1. every ways ---> Every thường đi với N số ít ---> every way hoặc anyway
2. Besieds ---> Besides.
3. neccessary thing ---> Vital thing (chị nghĩ sẽ hợp hơn)
4. Among the threats to endangered species ---> threats to have endangered'
5. Help to V sb/ sth. help protect the animals'----> help to protect the animals'
6. it's mean ---> Mean trong trường hợp này là động từ ----> It means that ...

Đấy là phần chỉnh ngữ pháp chị có thể tìm thấy ở bài viết của em. Chúc em đạt điểm cao nhé!!!! :D
 
1. every ways ---> Every thường đi với N số ít ---> every way hoặc anyway
2. Besieds ---> Besides.
3. neccessary thing ---> Vital thing (chị nghĩ sẽ hợp hơn)
4. Among the threats to endangered species ---> threats to have endangered'
5. Help to V sb/ sth. help protect the animals'----> help to protect the animals'
6. it's mean ---> Mean trong trường hợp này là động từ ----> It means that ...

Đấy là phần chỉnh ngữ pháp chị có thể tìm thấy ở bài viết của em. Chúc em đạt điểm cao nhé!!!! :D
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